Because the article List of continuity errors and anachronisms in M*A*S*H was very unorganized, I have spent some time reordering and reorganizing this article while the process is not finished, the goal is for each season/episode to have space for goofs, and this currently has been done for Abyssinia, Henry.Okay, I apologize for the long time it took, but I have done a variety of things to address your concerns: Please see automated peer review suggestions here.Thank you very much for the feedback, and I should be "finished" with the revisions this weekend. (It's certainly more encyclopedic than any Pokemon episode, for sure.) - Elkman - (Elkspeak) 20:19, 26 October 2006 (UTC) I am in the process of addressing your comments and concerns. Otherwise, I think you have a good article on your hands, especially one that really made an impact in the series. (In fact, I'm not 100% aware of this myself.) You might want to look at Wikipedia:Guide to layout#Standard_appendices for some more information on this. Also, I think the "Footnotes" section should be titled "References". I'd combine all the references to the Wittebols article into one reference, instead of having two different footnotes for it and one general reference."Spoilers end here" should come before the "Reaction and impact" section.Did the writers decide to kill off Colonel Blake's character as revenge for McLean Stevenson leaving the series? Or was his leaving amicable on all sides? There's a question about this in the McLean Stevenson article, though it might not be possible to find a true answer one way or the other.I'd recommend explaining in this article why the issue about service points was an anachronism, and then direct the reader to the article about goofs. It's hard to find the comment about service points on that page, though. The reference to service points says, "See goofs".Thank you very much for any and all advice and help. And then, secondly, if this article is suitable for FAC, I was also wondering what improvements can be made or any suggestions you might have. First of all, since this is a shorter article, and one on a specific episode of a TV show, would this be a suitable candidate for FAC? The article is researched well in my opinion, and has 20 citations from 10 sources. It achieved GA status after about a week and a half on Wikipedia, and I had a couple of questions regarding what can be done with it. This is an article which I originally created and worked on regarding one of the more notable episodes of the TV series M*A*S*H. MLilburne 11:49, 22 November 2006 (UTC) Ībyssinia, Henry (M*A*S*H episode) You probably also need a citation for the assertion that experts and fans consider the timeline to have a bearing on the series.While they die on Earth, they are transported to Narnia, where they witness its destruction, Narnian year 2555." They could stand to be broken up a bit, because at the moment they have the feeling of being run-ons. These two sentences are a bit awkward: "The serious railway accident of British Rail, as described in The Last Battle, causes the death of Digory and Polly, and this takes place in 1949.Thanks for the comments – low in numbers tells me there aren't too many problems! - Fbv 65 e del / ☑t / ☛c || 20:48, 12 November 2006 (UTC) Guess there's nothing else to be said then. Fbv 65 e del / ☑t / ☛c || 04:14, 31 October 2006 (UTC) Skimming over both this list and the featured list criteria, I'm going to tentatively say that there are no major barriers to FL status apparent to me. Hoping to get this to featured status (incidentally – would it classify as a featured list?). References section is short, but it all came from one (a book), and there's a web site to back it up. I consider it to be solid in its prose and complete in its content. 163 List of Buffy the Vampire Slayer episodes.162 British African-Caribbean community.119 Integrated Guided Missile Development Program.116.1 Other reviews will be replied to immediately.90 Sustainable Development Strategy in Canada.
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